Wrote a song

[tomatoesandradiowires]

That sounds very much like the gerbils I think. actually, Like the gerbils, microphones and white angle had some horrible illigitimate love baby. It's a .wav file, so sorry for the large size. This was the first time I played the song through and have since played it quite a bit and gotten better at hearing the pitches when I sing ;)

"small people big cities"
http://www.sendspace.com/file/pu1ijk

[wingedfeetxc]

I'll check it out.... I actually just wrote a song that is a complete Gerbils ripoff/homage just a few days ago. When I find some time to record it, I'll put it up on here as well.

[wingedfeetxc]

Originally posted by tomatoesandradiowires
That sounds very much like the gerbils I think. actually, Like the gerbils, microphones and white angle had some horrible illigitimate love baby. It's a .wav file, so sorry for the large size. This was the first time I played the song through and have since played it quite a bit and gotten better at hearing the pitches when I sing ;)

"small people big cities"
http://www.sendspace.com/file/pu1ijk


not bad not bad....certainly sounds a lot like the Gerbils. It's kind of funny cause my Gerbils homage/rippoff uses pretty much half the words you used (atoms, God, stars, sky etc.). I guess there is a formula for writing a Gerbils song. I'd like to here a more complete version of this song when you get done with it.

[tomatoesandradiowires]

Excellent! Thanks for taking the time to listen. I was allready thinking a female vocalist over the top of what I sing in the chorus, have a general idea of what I want from percussion and wouldn't mind some kind of bass heavy drone, like low octave organ.
I look forward to hearing your song.